how should i put this
it's boring. it sounds too monotone, even though there are different sounds, they all blend together makind it sound a bit mono. Maybe spice it up abit, shorten it, or even see if you can change one or two of the sounds or how they come it. There is alot that you can do to spice up this song, but yet, all that really rest upon you. It can be a good song, and i see the potentail of this becoming a great song, but. . .right now it doesn't have it yet. still good work.