hmmm
not the best i've heard but it is intearsting. it has something about it the just makes me want to listen to it all. there are some places you can improve on in this song. i gave ya a 5 to get this song up from a 0 and the fact i know you put a good amount of work into this. the 7 was because of all the sounds conflicting with each other, i'm sure you can tell yourself which sound conflicted, just needs some improvment on that area and you'll be doing much better.